Joseph Campbell's monomyth, or the hero's journey, is a basic pattern that its proponents argue is found in many narratives from around the world. This widely distributed pattern was described by Campbell in The Hero with a Thousand Faces (1949).With that narrative structure in mind, I now present my latest work of fiction: The Elevator.
In a monomyth, the hero begins in the ordinary world, and receives a call to enter an unknown world of strange powers and events. The hero who accepts the call to enter this strange world must face tasks and trials, either alone or with assistance. In the most intense versions of the narrative, the hero must survive a severe challenge, often with help. If the hero survives, he may achieve a great gift or "boon." The hero must then decide whether to return to the ordinary world with this boon. If the hero does decide to return, he or she often faces challenges on the return journey. If the hero returns successfully, the boon or gift may be used to improve the world.
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Jack stood in front of the gleaming steel doors. He had pushed the "up" button a few seconds earlier, but as yet nothing had happened. Was he mistaken? Had he pushed the button true? And if he had, was it possible that it had failed to trigger for some reason and no car was coming? No...the button was lit, he confirmed. Surely that must mean something.
Suddenly a polite but indifferent "bing" alerted him to the arrival of his means of conveyance.
Like a creature menacingly peeling back its teeth and gums to consume some helpless prey, the doors slid open. It was time to decide whether he really intended to go through with it.
Jack considered his options: "Do I board? Or do I retreat to the safety of the bustling crowd, making its way here and there, but not up. Never up."
Decision made, he turned to go. But as he did, he noticed an older gentleman, a little to his left and back. "Are you getting on, buddy?", the stranger asked, "If we miss it, it could be a few more minutes for another one."
Jack took a breath and stepped forward. The stranger followed and the doors closed behind them.
Blinking in the artificial light, Jack now saw that the elevator hadn't been empty when he and the other man had embarked. To the side, hidden from outside the doors by the panel of buttons, there stood a young woman in jeans and a t-shirt that said something like "Suck it!" (or so he thought, from the side-on view available to him).
She was chewing something. Without looking at either of her new companions, she asked: "Floor?"
Jack waited. If he declared his destination first, the stranger beside him - who, after all, might be seeking mayhem once he was alone with Jack - could just declare the same floor, follow him off, and attack then.
The girl demanded again, "Floor???"
The stranger muttered "15". Jack said, "Me too".
The girl pressed 15 with a quick glance over her shoulder and the barely noticeable raising of an eyebrow. Barely noticeable, but noticed nonetheless.
That's when Jack realized that there was no other button lit. The girl had been alone on the elevator before its arrival on Jack's floor, but she had not selected a floor at all. Where was she going? What was she doing here? He needed answers.
He summoned his courage, cleared his throat, and in a shaky voice asked the question screaming in his mind: "Excuse me young lady, what floor...are you...going to?"
She answered: "26. Button's broke, in case yer wonderin'."
Suddenly the elevator shuddered and stopped. The lights blinked off and the on, just once.
Jack's eyes shot to the floor number above the door. It said "5". Looking down from there, he could see through the thin crack between the two halves of the door that they weren't on 5 at all. Between 4 and 5? Between 5 and 6? Did it matter?
Feeling the intense atmosphere in the now-stopped car, Jack forced himself to overcome his jitters and said, quite confidently despite how he felt, "Well!"
The girl seemed unsurprised. The stranger yawned.
And then, as if nothing had happened, the elevator lurched back to life. Ascending once more.
7...
8...
9...
10...
Having proven his bravery by asking the girl about her floor and by saying "Well!" when the situation had seemed so bleak, he turned to the stranger. Laughing nervously, he asked "Funny that we're on the same floor, isn't it?"
The stranger replied, "Funny, indeed. I wonder, in fact, if you didn't say '15' only because I had. I wonder in fact, if you don't have some twisted motive that has you following me, a weary old man, off onto my potentially deserted floor."
And then the stranger laughed: "I'm just playing with you, buddy. I saw that you're also going to the law office on the 15th. You've got their business card sticking out of your back pocket."
Relieved that the man seemed an ally, Jack relaxed. Then he remember the girl. Was she lying about the broken button? Was she planning something amiss when they reached 15? Had she been behind the temporary stoppage, testing their nerves? Testing their will?
Had he passed her test?
And if the stranger had known all along that Jack's destination was 15, had he only said "15" as part of his trap?
...15!
Another "bing" and the elevator stopped once again. Jack was safe.
As the doors slid open, he weighed his choices. His time on the elevator had stimulated in him a sense of adventure and feelings of bravado that felt alien and wonderful. He had spoken to strangers and - what's more - he had initiated those exchanges. Here he was, so close to his destination, but no longer sure whether that should be his destination at all.
Maybe he should stay on the elevator and never sign the legal papers for the new apartment. Maybe the elevator is where he was meant to be. He puffed out his chest and started breathing with greater intensity at the prospect of the new Jack.
The stranger prodded him, "You getting off?"
Jack said, "Yes, I suppose I am."
The girl smirked.
As Jack left the elevator, he stumbled a bit as he stepped over the threshold. After that, he made his way down the hall. Instead of meekly knocking at the law office door like he might have done before, he confidently pushed it open...